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高考满分作文:指挥棒还是奖牌

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2021-08-11 11:01:08

最近,一篇名为《生活在树上》的浙江省高考澳门真人赌场满分作文引发网络热议。人们的观点也非常鲜明地分成了两派:有人认为,这位考生的知识面和阅读量、以及对哲学问题的思考令人印象深刻;也有人认为,考生故意炫技,这样的写法不值得提倡,可以得高分但不应该是满分。

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佳作还是炫技

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不要忘了,这是一篇考场作文

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满分作文应承担什么“历史重任”

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